Very good, humorous, great voice over.
I really loved the voice over, it was great.
Another thing I admired, was the movement of the character, I loved his expressions and the way he moved around right up close to the camera behind the mail, etc. The animation wasn't smooth, but I think it was intended to be that way.
The timing of his expressions was priceless as well.
I loved the way the backgrounds were drawn too, your line work from thick to thin was sparatic and I thought that was great.
The underlining background music, drum beat would have been nice if it was just a tad louder, because it was a nice choice to set the mood, but was almost unnoticeable.
Great work! You have obviously been doing this a long time, and look to your work to learn many things.
Funny, good facials, poor animation.
I like the facial expressions. Even though the drawings were simple, they still had some preety good facial expressions.
Work on your timing, things could have been a lot more funnier if they were timed a bit better.
This is great! Brilliant! Loved the change of art
I thought this was great! What I really loved was how each scene had a totally different style to it. I really loved the voice over acting as well. Great idea!
Another thing I wanted to point out was the hand gestures, you did such a great job at portraying the thoughts as the character spoke through their hands.
There was one scene that you used a boil effect, I thought that was really neat as well.
Has good potential.
It has good potential. My biggest complaint was that the angle of it made it hard to "whack" things. I do like the sound effects that were chosen and the overall style. It would also be neat if you animated a reaction with the things that you whack.
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